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PostSubject: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:58 am

I love the way you call my name,
I love the way you play your game.
The way you touch,the way you smile,
Makes me melt down but just for a little while.
Even when you're mad,the look in your eyes,
It turns me on and i forget what it is to be wise.
The flame inside me is now becoming a fire,
I'm so happy you're here,you're every womans' desire.
But baby i got to be real,i got to be true,
I'm so deep in love but it's not with you.


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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:02 am

damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are u a poet or sumting??? i love this poem
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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:51 am

hello ava you are wasting talent here you know,you should get writing
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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Wed Feb 27, 2008 1:19 pm

thanks german ......thanks J ,
the art of poetry leads my way.
to fame n success,wish me the best,
ill be on my way,out on the quest.
i wont forget those who encouraged me,
when am high on the market n living happy.



Laughing memba this fi when mi mek it big....mi ago read it pon mi red carpet entrance Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:57 pm

hmm i do sense one prob is your poem where is the scenery and the plots i think you should have those values enrolled to be a successful writer
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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Thu Feb 28, 2008 8:21 pm

i didnt wanna be the one to have to say this but i dont think this piece needs a scenery or a plot
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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Thu Feb 28, 2008 8:24 pm

3v!l d!v@ wrote:
thanks german ......thanks J ,
the art of poetry leads my way.
to fame n success,wish me the best,
ill be on my way,out on the quest.
i wont forget those who encouraged me,
when am high on the market n living happy.



Laughing memba this fi when mi mek it big....mi ago read it pon mi red carpet entrance Laughing



if itz this piece you were referring to itz jus something i wrote then n there as i was thanking german n jr for their comments it aint nun serious lol
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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:14 pm

lool dat so funny...
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PostSubject: Re: I'M IN LOVE BUT IT'S NOT WITH YOU   Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:08 pm

ye gothica u lost that battle
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