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PostSubject: WAS ALL A LIE!   Wed Dec 03, 2008 8:17 pm

[b]Your love was a lie

And i often wonder why

Why did you lie Question Question Question


And leave me to die

Inside i have so much pain

Why did you do this

What did you gain Question confused


Your love was a lie

And still you have no cares

And now all im left with is just sum stupid tears Sad Sad

I feel nothing but sorrow and deep remorse

Also so much anger Evil or Very Mad

Beware cuz ts growing stronger and stronger Twisted Evil Twisted Evil


Your love was a lie

I now know that is true

I want nothing at all to do with you

I feel so emotional

I wanna cry Sad

But all i do is make a big sigh Neutral Neutral


And try to feel what can hurt more than your lies

But nothing hurts more NOTHING[/b
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PostSubject: Re: WAS ALL A LIE!   Sat Dec 06, 2008 8:49 am

good poem keep it up

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PostSubject: Re: WAS ALL A LIE!   Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:34 pm

Smile Nice poem Renny. I like it and shows that it comes from within,like you write it based on a real experience
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